Enigma


Some call her real,
Some call her fake,
But she endures all,
Not for her sake!
To some she is an angel,
Sent from heaven to earth;
Yet to others she is a sequel,
Of him who takes heaven from earth!
She stood between life and death,
Slowly with scarcely a breadth!
Torn between love and hate,
She stood mistaking fight as fate;
Amidst friend and foe,
She was a trapped doe!
With a smile on her lips
And tears in her eye,
From above the cliffs
She soared to the sky!
And the endless beauty
Becomes a timeless legacy!!


Comments

An said…
Nice! but ,
1.who is she?
2.Who is he who takes heaven from earth? Are u referring to god here? if so how?
3. How is she a sequel? is she a godly creature devoid of emotions that can be considered human?
4.If above factors are true, how relevant is being torn between love and hate...?

Sorry bout so many queries... keep writing...
Paro said…
appreciate your thought flow.
keep writing ...
waiting for more n more poems
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Unknown said…
my beauty.....

Beauty they say is in the
eyes of the beholder...

for me...
it is in your tender looks
in the loving words
in the spontaneous gestures
and affection

much beyond physical
appearance
looks or outward "get-up"s

beauty is in the
heart...

thank you for being my
beautiful friend

with love
mala
Unknown said…
hey suchi......itz really gud man keep writing.luved all ur poems

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